tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post1759219553357169936..comments2023-07-31T08:55:36.653-04:00Comments on Lauri Meyers .: White Cat's Halloween - a Halloweensie PoemLauri Meyershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15714245926405732068noreply@blogger.comBlogger68125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-38283071525753810872013-11-03T18:31:26.179-05:002013-11-03T18:31:26.179-05:00Thanks Meg :DThanks Meg :DLauri Meyershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15714245926405732068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-72177978064766893482013-11-03T18:31:12.203-05:002013-11-03T18:31:12.203-05:00Thank you Patricia! Your blessing on my rhyme mean...Thank you Patricia! Your blessing on my rhyme means a lot!Lauri Meyershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15714245926405732068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-68117798825727545122013-11-03T18:30:49.342-05:002013-11-03T18:30:49.342-05:00Yes! Give your ten-year-old a high five, because h...Yes! Give your ten-year-old a high five, because he's my target audience, and it sounds like he pretty much rocks :)Lauri Meyershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15714245926405732068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-83398272551529134062013-11-03T10:44:14.291-05:002013-11-03T10:44:14.291-05:00Great story in so few words AND the rhyme was wond...Great story in so few words AND the rhyme was wonderful! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-66935031797842077422013-11-03T09:27:12.021-05:002013-11-03T09:27:12.021-05:00haha! That's wonderful Lauri. :Dhaha! That's wonderful Lauri. :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-15739912292783502572013-11-02T16:06:15.838-04:002013-11-02T16:06:15.838-04:00Nice job! I had first tried to write a poem for th...Nice job! I had first tried to write a poem for the Halloweensie contest, but it failed miserably. My ten-year-old loved how you showed that white cats can be scary too :)Michelle Notthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15123833160663923073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-54964839942878885032013-11-02T10:18:13.643-04:002013-11-02T10:18:13.643-04:00thanks Jarm!thanks Jarm!Lauri Meyershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15714245926405732068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-11548776249276956242013-11-01T15:04:44.449-04:002013-11-01T15:04:44.449-04:00Integrating the topic of bullying into a Halloween...Integrating the topic of bullying into a Halloween story is difficult. Good job, Lauri!Jarm Del Bocciohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16734893974122730211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-41247960756043076362013-11-01T13:42:36.888-04:002013-11-01T13:42:36.888-04:00Well, Robyn anyone can rhyme so bad! But rhyming w...Well, Robyn anyone can rhyme so bad! But rhyming well is like training to run a marathon. I must have said "that's probably good enough" 10 times before I finally fixed every line as best I could. I hope it turned out really good enough in the end.Lauri Meyershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15714245926405732068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-86111282874533840342013-10-31T19:44:40.075-04:002013-10-31T19:44:40.075-04:00Spooky! Love it! We have a white cat and he can lo...Spooky! Love it! We have a white cat and he can look and sound positively ghostly. The rhyme makes me jealous. (I want to rhyme so bad!) Robyn Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17356555082768185840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-61867483335331072722013-10-31T10:37:54.823-04:002013-10-31T10:37:54.823-04:00Yes, Carrie - we both felt compelled to tackle cat...Yes, Carrie - we both felt compelled to tackle cat bullying. Well, you know, October is Anti-Bullying month!Lauri Meyershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15714245926405732068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-84830278705919959992013-10-30T23:35:46.499-04:002013-10-30T23:35:46.499-04:00I love this Lauri! Mine has a sort of similar them...I love this Lauri! Mine has a sort of similar theme. Great twist ending!Carrie Fhttp://storypatch.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-52790332807673847802013-10-30T21:03:24.626-04:002013-10-30T21:03:24.626-04:00Thanks Jackie for stopping by. I enjoyed meeting y...Thanks Jackie for stopping by. I enjoyed meeting you on your blog and your piece was magnificent!Lauri Meyershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15714245926405732068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-70586801107388493252013-10-30T21:02:52.349-04:002013-10-30T21:02:52.349-04:00Poor wittle kitty witty with his little taily all ...Poor wittle kitty witty with his little taily all said and wilted :( I'm so glad he got on the broomstick anyway and showed them his glow!Lauri Meyershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15714245926405732068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-42734460700923369912013-10-30T20:16:21.553-04:002013-10-30T20:16:21.553-04:00I love everything rhyme-y. This was cute. Thanks ...I love everything rhyme-y. This was cute. Thanks for sharing. I like it a lot.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08513112351946721180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-28003605805983809812013-10-30T19:56:41.112-04:002013-10-30T19:56:41.112-04:00Aw, that wilted tail got me.Aw, that wilted tail got me.Author Amokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-437811093783712792013-10-30T19:45:33.688-04:002013-10-30T19:45:33.688-04:00Thanks Pam! There was a brief period where I consi...Thanks Pam! There was a brief period where I considered having her turn the other cats into pumpkins with her magic eyes, but 100 words was just not enough. Oh, that and I didn't want her to be too cruel.:)Lauri Meyershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15714245926405732068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-63451081922485211622013-10-30T19:43:54.472-04:002013-10-30T19:43:54.472-04:00You just gave me the most terrible thought. If yo...You just gave me the most terrible thought. If you had super human hearing, would you be able to hear some sort of horrifying sound that spiders make? Ewww, I'm sure it's dreadful.Lauri Meyershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15714245926405732068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-43315322706550256662013-10-30T19:42:37.949-04:002013-10-30T19:42:37.949-04:00Thank you Michelle - that means a lot coming from ...Thank you Michelle - that means a lot coming from you! All the cats I've read it too have sat politely through the whole thing :)Lauri Meyershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15714245926405732068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-40481738402217355572013-10-30T19:41:44.653-04:002013-10-30T19:41:44.653-04:00Agree, there's plenty of moon to meow at and p...Agree, there's plenty of moon to meow at and plenty of kids ready to be scared. Sharing is Daring :)Lauri Meyershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15714245926405732068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-22556604515057887312013-10-30T19:39:46.220-04:002013-10-30T19:39:46.220-04:00Yeah, you're right!! Those scaredy black cats ...Yeah, you're right!! Those scaredy black cats just hide in the dark. You have to be tough to be seen and be spooky!Lauri Meyershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15714245926405732068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-28144828781348371222013-10-30T19:24:45.629-04:002013-10-30T19:24:45.629-04:00Laura, great idea about the white cat on Halloween...Laura, great idea about the white cat on Halloween--no one ever thinks about them! I loved the line, "Sounded like a laughing rat!" Clever!Pamela Brunskillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10987976825374393150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-23180106605489258342013-10-30T15:39:14.572-04:002013-10-30T15:39:14.572-04:00I think you're right, white cats can be scary,...I think you're right, white cats can be scary, especially with those green eyes. As for laughing rats, almost as scary as spiders. Almost. <br />Awesome, spooky tale, Lauri!!Coleen Patrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15863892455120177554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-56511902715539019772013-10-30T13:23:06.021-04:002013-10-30T13:23:06.021-04:00I had two white cats growing up and I'm quite ...I had two white cats growing up and I'm quite sure they would have thoroughly appreciated this story! Also, from one rhymer to another, it reads beautifully!Michelle Heidenrich Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02051827857519159837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6953622313060163187.post-25352530666131305512013-10-30T12:26:06.776-04:002013-10-30T12:26:06.776-04:00Great story, love the twist of Spooky White cat......Great story, love the twist of Spooky White cat...why should black cats have all the fun.. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04912042765263268958noreply@blogger.com